The Concept Album: Post #2

Can you tell I'm super excited about this album? can you? :)
I'm proud to announce that I have written my 2nd song of this year, & I'm quite sure that this song has a pretty good chance of making it to the album. Its defiantly written from the perceptive of The Desert Boy, I have indeed emailed this (as well as the rough phone recording of the song) to the Fairy Tale author.
Have a read, & let me know your thoughts.


Written & Composed by: mOsno
Copyright: 2011
Song Title: Lost the Sun
[verse 1]
Gloomy day
I know you will not understand this
You've been an old friend
But now I must ask you to be vanquished

Yes I know, I know
I've been your home for so long till my soul turned dim
Yes I know, but my heart
Has overgrown for your vileness to live in it

[chorus]
Because now
I will quest to the edge of this realm
To fight dragons & demons made of venom
That are filled with nothing but hatred in them
To find her smile
For without my love's light I have lost
The sun.

[verse 2]
Oracle
I know your trust in me has faded
I am to blame
Full of walls, full of thoughts ever so jaded
Yes I know, yes I know
You’ve been my home for so long till my soul turned dim
Yes I know, but my heart
Is open now for your wisdom so please help me win

[chorus]
Because now
I will quest to the edge of this realm
To fight dragons & demons made of venom
That are filled with nothing but hatred in them
To find her smile
For without my love's light I have lost
The sun.

[verse 3]
Sister Muse
I know your faith in me is shaken
Fickle & a fool
I neglected to see that I was breaking...
...Your heart, with my thoughts
That all I do is all for me until our souls turned dim
But right now, I’m here again
A humble man, a tortured spirit, so please heal my grim

[Extended Chorus]
Because now
I will quest to the edge of this realm
To fight dragons & demons made of venom
That are filled with nothing but hatred in them
To find her smile
But I need the wisdom of your oracle mother
& your faith of a decent loyal lover
& the song to bind her fears in purple leather
to find her smile
For without my love's light I have lost
The sun.

Lovely day
I’m so glad you are not forsaken
Now with my lover’s smile, the sun is here for your taking.

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I hope you enjoyed it..give me your thoughts in the comment section.
Thanks :)
Much Love
mOsno